Thanks for the review and comments, I think I fixed all of them now. Please let me know if you find further issues to fix. Best Regards, Ildikó

On Aug 3, 2020, at 20:37, Camp, MaryX <maryx.camp@intel.com> wrote:

I added some editorial comments in github too, let me know if they aren't clear.

-----Original Message----- From: Jones, Bruce E <bruce.e.jones@intel.com> Sent: Monday, August 3, 2020 2:25 PM To: Ildiko Vancsa <ildiko.vancsa@gmail.com>; starlingx <starlingx-discuss@lists.starlingx.io> Subject: Re: [Starlingx-discuss] StarlingX 4.0 blog post

I don't know how to add comments to github, so I'm just going to put them here.

Replace: The StarlingX community has just launched the fourth release of the project with various new features and enhancements to the platform. With: The StarlingX community is pleased to announce the 4.0 release with new features and enhancements to the platform.

Replace: The project is approaching a half-year release cycle With: The project has a half-year release cycle

Overall the post looks very good, thank you for putting it together!

brucej

-----Original Message----- From: Ildiko Vancsa <ildiko.vancsa@gmail.com> Sent: Monday, August 3, 2020 7:43 AM To: starlingx <starlingx-discuss@lists.starlingx.io> Subject: [Starlingx-discuss] StarlingX 4.0 blog post

Hi,

I typed up a short blog post to highlight some of the 4.0 features.

You can check out the PR here: https://github.com/StarlingXWeb/starlingx-website/pull/89

Please let me know if you have any comments or add it to the PR.

Thanks and Best Regards, Ildikó

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